Post by J. T./Jessica on Jul 20, 2013 9:42:34 GMT -5
It's been years, but you remember that idea I had where Kim didn't write the letter, her coach did 'to remove distractions'? I've actually started work on turning idea to story...
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Opening Scene
"Tommy," Billy extended a hand, "May I see this piece of correspondence?"
"Yeah, whatever," the Red Zeo Ranger slapped it into Billy's hand, "I'm going outside... for a walk..."
Billy quickly skimmed over it, "Tommy, wait!"
Tommy turned back and snarled, "What?"
"I have my doubts as to the veracity of this letter's claims to have originated with Kimberly," the former-Blue Power Ranger answered, "The word usage and sentence structure do not match with what I am familiar with from her."
Tommy's eyes widened as he mentally translated the words from 'Billy-speak' to English, "You're saying Kim didn't send that letter?"
"Or if she did so, it was under duress with the abnormal formation of the letter meant to serve as a warning to us," Billy nodded carefully, "The evidence points to it, especially considering her original ambivalence towards attending the Pan-Globals training camp and discontinuing her time here as a Ranger and with you with which to begin, this sudden reversal in attitude sets off numerous behavoural alarms."
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Opening Scene
"Tommy," Billy extended a hand, "May I see this piece of correspondence?"
"Yeah, whatever," the Red Zeo Ranger slapped it into Billy's hand, "I'm going outside... for a walk..."
Billy quickly skimmed over it, "Tommy, wait!"
Tommy turned back and snarled, "What?"
"I have my doubts as to the veracity of this letter's claims to have originated with Kimberly," the former-Blue Power Ranger answered, "The word usage and sentence structure do not match with what I am familiar with from her."
Tommy's eyes widened as he mentally translated the words from 'Billy-speak' to English, "You're saying Kim didn't send that letter?"
"Or if she did so, it was under duress with the abnormal formation of the letter meant to serve as a warning to us," Billy nodded carefully, "The evidence points to it, especially considering her original ambivalence towards attending the Pan-Globals training camp and discontinuing her time here as a Ranger and with you with which to begin, this sudden reversal in attitude sets off numerous behavoural alarms."